[v1] qapi: convert "Note" and "Example" sections to rST

[PATCH 10/13] qapi: update prose in note blocks

Posted by John Snow 10 months, 3 weeks ago

Where I've noticed, rephrase the note to read more fluently.

Signed-off-by: John Snow <jsnow@redhat.com>
---
 qapi/block-core.json | 4 ++--
 qga/qapi-schema.json | 2 +-
 2 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/qapi/block-core.json b/qapi/block-core.json
index cacedfb771c..9ef23ec02ae 100644
--- a/qapi/block-core.json
+++ b/qapi/block-core.json
@@ -6048,9 +6048,9 @@
 #
 # @name: the name of the internal snapshot to be created
 #
-# .. note:: In transaction, if @name is empty, or any snapshot matching
+# .. note:: In a transaction, if @name is empty or any snapshot matching
 #    @name exists, the operation will fail.  Only some image formats
-#    support it, for example, qcow2, and rbd.
+#    support it; for example, qcow2, and rbd.
 #
 # Since: 1.7
 ##
diff --git a/qga/qapi-schema.json b/qga/qapi-schema.json
index 57598331c5c..1273d85bb5f 100644
--- a/qga/qapi-schema.json
+++ b/qga/qapi-schema.json
@@ -480,7 +480,7 @@
 #
 # Returns: Number of file systems thawed by this call
 #
-# .. note:: If return value does not match the previous call to
+# .. note:: If the return value does not match the previous call to
 #    guest-fsfreeze-freeze, this likely means some freezable filesystems
 #    were unfrozen before this call, and that the filesystem state may
 #    have changed before issuing this command.
-- 
2.44.0

Re: [PATCH 10/13] qapi: update prose in note blocks

Posted by Markus Armbruster 10 months, 3 weeks ago

John Snow <jsnow@redhat.com> writes:

> Where I've noticed, rephrase the note to read more fluently.
>
> Signed-off-by: John Snow <jsnow@redhat.com>
> ---
>  qapi/block-core.json | 4 ++--
>  qga/qapi-schema.json | 2 +-
>  2 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/qapi/block-core.json b/qapi/block-core.json
> index cacedfb771c..9ef23ec02ae 100644
> --- a/qapi/block-core.json
> +++ b/qapi/block-core.json
> @@ -6048,9 +6048,9 @@
>  #
>  # @name: the name of the internal snapshot to be created
>  #
> -# .. note:: In transaction, if @name is empty, or any snapshot matching
> +# .. note:: In a transaction, if @name is empty or any snapshot matching
>  #    @name exists, the operation will fail.  Only some image formats
> -#    support it, for example, qcow2, and rbd.
> +#    support it; for example, qcow2, and rbd.
>  #
>  # Since: 1.7
>  ##
> diff --git a/qga/qapi-schema.json b/qga/qapi-schema.json
> index 57598331c5c..1273d85bb5f 100644
> --- a/qga/qapi-schema.json
> +++ b/qga/qapi-schema.json
> @@ -480,7 +480,7 @@
>  #
>  # Returns: Number of file systems thawed by this call
>  #
> -# .. note:: If return value does not match the previous call to
> +# .. note:: If the return value does not match the previous call to
>  #    guest-fsfreeze-freeze, this likely means some freezable filesystems
>  #    were unfrozen before this call, and that the filesystem state may
>  #    have changed before issuing this command.

Reviewed-by: Markus Armbruster <armbru@redhat.com>